Surviving seventh grade with Super Awkward Weirdo Syndrome—aka social anxiety—is tough enough before Brian lands in foster care on the Worst. Birthday. Ever. As Brian struggles, Ezra wants to help but he’s hiding his Brian-crush. For both, opening up means risking rejection—or maybe discovering the best in each other, and in themselves.
Shoot. Don’t overthink. Just shoot.
The command flashed in my brain as I caught a pass on the schoolyard basketball court. I was coiled and ready with a clean look at the hoop. Still, I hesitated a half-second too long. By the time I let fly, Ezra Komizarek was running at me with hands outstretched and I launched too high. My shot fell short, grazing the rim just enough to spare me the humiliation of an airball.
No big deal. Everybody misses sometimes.
I didn’t shoot again all game.
My miss still haunted me as the bell rang. Everyone drifted into school in groups except me. I walked two steps behind Ezra and Tyrone Marsman. They talked, like regular kids. They joked and quoted movies they’d watched over the weekend at Ezra’s birthday sleepover. I tried to figure out how to join without triggering a social catastrophe.
Internal Argument #4,222
Me: I could say, “Hey, your birthday was last weekend? Mine’s tomorrow.” That’s an easy conversation starter, right?
Also Me: Are you kidding? That’s a guaranteed trainwreck.
Also Me: Think about it. They’ll ask what you’re doing for your birthday. “Not much,” you’ll mumble, reminding everyone you’re a friendless loser.
I stayed quiet. As usual.
As we filed inside, Ty slowed to fist-bump another kid and Ezra noticed me trailing.
“Hey Brian. Good game, huh?”
I was still flushed from playing basketball, which helped disguise my instant layer of fresh sweat.
This sounds wonderful, I’d love to read it. Please send the query and full manuscript (as a Word doc) to brent(at)triadaus(dot)com.
Hi Chad! I love this opening and how you captured Brian’s voice through an internal argument. I’d love to read more! Please send a query letter and attach the full manuscript as a Word doc with “Pitch Wars” in the subject line to firstname.lastname@example.org.
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Looking forward to reading more.
This is off to a nice start. I’d love to see more! Please submit your query and first 30 pages via my Query Manager: http://QueryMe.Online/marloberliner
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I love this character and premise.
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I’m intrigued by the pitch, and you already had me laughing at Internal Argument #4,222! Please send your query letter and the full manuscript as a Word doc to email@example.com with PITCH WARS REQUEST in the subject line. Thanks and look forward to reading more!
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