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PW2019 Adult #13: EDGE OF A SAVAGE LAND (Historical Fiction)
Mentee:
Joanna Vitiello
Mentored by:
Carrie Callaghan and Michelle Hauck
Book Title:
EDGE OF A SAVAGE LAND
Category:
Adult
Genre:
Historical Fiction
Word Count:
109,000

Pitch:

Italy. 1392. Béa, daughter of a volatile feudal lord, seeks stability after her fiancé’s death, but her father’s erratic behavior destroys her marriage prospects and poisons family relationships. As a dormant vendetta awakens, Béa must find a path to peace in her patriarchal world or risk losing her beloved brothers and her future.

 

Excerpt:

“Gabriel, you’ll be the death of me. Let’s go.”

My brother ignores me as he studies the underside of the bridge over Frog River. Last autumn, some boys fishing on the riverbank saw a column of dust shake loose and pour into the water below. No one has found the source, but Gabriel thinks he sees a thin line among the stones, just before the second piling.

He’s fascinated, but I’m not. I see only a blur of rock and shade. I glance back at Monte d’Oro’s walls, bright against a bitter sky.

“Dear Béa. You’re strong; you’ll survive a little cold. We’ll be back before we’re missed. And it’s pears, you know. Pears.”

Last week, on the Feast of Sant’Agnese, Father Carlo preached that when Agnese fled from the man who lusted for her, she cried, away from me, food of Death! We asked why she called him food, and why Death should need to eat. Father Carlo said that to the Saints, sin tastes like death, but suffering tastes sweet. Gabriel transformed this lesson into a relentless and annoying game. Embarrassment tastes like spoiled fruit. Love tastes like lemon water. Somehow, he’s drawn me in, so that all morning, as we slipped undetected through the hidden South Gate and scrambled down the riverbank, we have argued about the taste of desperation. I say lentil soup, but he says pears. Ominous, succulent pears, early harbingers of winter’s suffering. Pears bring that first, fresh kiss of fear.

4 responses to “PW2019 Adult #13: EDGE OF A SAVAGE LAND (Historical Fiction)”

  1. Laura Crockett says:

    This sounds great! Please send an email with subject line containing “Pitch Wars,” your official query in the body of the email, and the first 50 pages in an attached Word doc to laura(at)triadaus(dot)com. Looking forward!
    -Laura Crockett, TriadaUS

  2. Rena Rossner says:

    Hi there!

    This sounds great! I’d love to take a look at the first 50 pages. Please send them attached as a word document!

    Thanks so much!

    – Rena Rossner

  3. Stefanie Lieberman says:

    I’d love to read more! Please send the pitch and the manuscript to submissions@janklow.com with the following subject line: for Stefanie Lieberman – Pitch Wars 19. Thank you!

  4. Penelope Burns says:

    Hi Joanna,

    I would love to see this! Can you send your query and first fifty pages to penelope@gelfmanschneider.com, with #PitchWars in the subject line? Thanks so much!

    All best,
    Penelope