THE UNTAMED meets THE CRUEL PRINCE—
Lanyu is the charming, shameless, brothel-hopping son of a powerful family in Tianhua. When the Emperor orders Lanyu’s little sister to become his concubine, Lanyu is terrified she’ll lose her life to treacherous palace politics. Desperate, he arms himself with rouges, dresses as a woman, and takes her place to sabotage the union.
But Lanyu miscalculates and, in disguise, is forced to marry the uptight Third Prince instead, sweeping him into a vicious struggle for the throne wherein his morally righteous spouse is the worst contender. If Lanyu’s to survive, he must outwit the court’s sharpest players and lift his husband onto the throne—without getting caught in his deception.
His world was red. It was the sort of red that came not with blood but with weddings. The crimson bridal veil draped over his face made sure of that. Tradition meant for it to be lifted only by a husband’s hand.
Lanyu’s fingers clenched his red brocaded lap, swaying with the motions of the palanquin.
Trumpets blared around him. Firecrackers spat. And somewhere amongst the clip-clop of hooves carrying the ninety-six men making up the imperial wedding procession, the groom perched, high and cold, above his stallion. The groom. His groom.
Lanyu had never been one to picture his wedding day, but even if he had, this wasn’t something he could ever have imagined for himself. To be the bride. Not merely an imposter but also a man. He’d be dead within the day if his new husband realised. Throat cut. Corpse flayed. And his head returned to his father, who’d burn it for shaming their family name.
Deceiving the Emperor was not a survivable transgression. Lanyu knew this. And yet…
He would spare his sister from this wretched marriage.
The veil lifted.
Wow, I love the complexity of the pitch AND the writing here. This sounds amazing, and I’d love to read more. Please kindly send the full manuscript and a synopsis as word doc attachments to hilaryquery at ktliterary.com with ‘Pitchwars Requested Material’ in the subject field. I can’t wait to dive in!
Hilary Harwell, Literary Agent
KT Literary LLC
Please send first 20 pages to QueryMe.online/Karly/ and please add “PitchWars” before your title. Thank you for sharing your work.
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This sounds so great and I’d love to read! If you’re interested in sending, could you please email the full manuscript to email@example.com and make sure to include “PW2020” in your subject line?
I would love to take a look at this! Please feel free to send me this query and the first 50 pages as a Word attachment to firstname.lastname@example.org, with your name, title, genre, and “Pitch Wars” in the subject line. (Also, if you have requests from two or more of us at JGLM, please do pick and send to only one of us.)
Hi Lujia! I’d love to read more. If you think we’d be a good fit, please send your query + full manuscript to Lauren@triadaus.com, and put “PW Request” in the subject line. I look forward to hearing from you! ~Lauren
This description of your work immediately had me hooked. I would love to read more!
Would you please send your full manuscript, a synopsis of the project, and a short bio about what you do and any of your previous publications to Haley@CMALit.com? Each should be a separate attachment in Microsoft Word or PDF format. To ensure your email doesn’t get lost in the shuffle, please include “Pitch Wars” in your subject line.
The two other agents at Creative Media Agency, Paige Wheeler and Shannon Snow, are participating in Pitch Wars with me. Should one of them also request your manuscript, we would appreciate it if you would choose the agent you’d most prefer to work with and only send them the requested materials. Should they pass on the project for any reason, and you find yourself still seeking an agent, then you are of course free to resubmit to another member of CMA.
Thank you for taking the time to send me more of what you’ve written!
Hi Lujia! This sounds great and I’d love to read more! If interested, please send your first 50 pages to email@example.com. Thank you!
Hi, Lujia! OMG. I LOVE this premise!!! I seriously need to read this MS! Can you send me the full and a synopsis (2-4 pages)? Please use Times New Roman, size 12, black, double-spaced text, 1” margins all around, and ½” paragraph indents. Please go here: QueryManager.com/QueryLynnetteNovak/Pitch_Wars_2020_Requested_Only to submit to me. Attach the manuscript and synopsis as two separate Word documents (docx). Thanks.
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Looking forward to reading more.
H! I’d love to see this! I love your writing! Please send the manuscript with the query pasted into the first page to Suzie(at)newleafliterary(dot)com. Put REQUESTED-PITCH WARS in the subject line.
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This entire pitch and excerpt is everything I never knew I needed! WOW. I’d love to request the full manuscript to see how the story develops!
If you’d like to share it, please send the query in the body of an email, with the full manuscript and synopsis attached as a Word doc.
The subject of the email should be “Pitch Wars Request: WE RISE LIKE EMPERORS for Root Literary” sent to firstname.lastname@example.org.
Although not all of Root Literary is participating in Pitch Wars, please feel free to query whoever feels like the best fit! We’re happy to coordinate internally.
All the best,
Hi Lujia, I would love to see more material for this project! If you would like to submit to me, please send me your query letter, synopsis, and first 3 chapters/50 pages (whichever is longer) at the following link: QueryManager.com/emlysaght/Pitchwars2020
Dear Lujia, I am hooked. Your writing is so suspenseful and I am completely immersed in this world with you. I would absolutely love to read more. Could you please send through the first 50 pages of your MS for our consideration? My email is email@example.com Really looking forward to reading more, and I hope you are doing very well! All best, Anya; Peony Literary Agency
I’d love to see more! Please send the query in the body of an email with the full MS attached to firstname.lastname@example.org. Please mention Pitch Wars in the subject line!
Oh my god–I absolutely love, love, love this!!!! What an excellent hook!
Please could you send the query and first fifty pages to me, as an attachment, at email@example.com? Please paste your query on the first page of your attached sample pages, and also in the body of the email, and include PITCH WARS in the subject line. If more than one JDLA agent requests, feel free to first submit to the one you think is the best fit.
Wow, I really want to read more! I’m a big fan of palace/political intrigue and I’m eager to know what happens to Lanyu. Please send the full via this form: QueryManager.com/Kari_Sutherland_Query_Form/PitchWars. If more than one Bradford Literary agent requests it, you can send to multiple of us, just let us know so we can coordinate. Many thanks! Kari