Incense and Sensibility x The Marriage Game
When struggling brand consultant Naomi lands a career-saving job she’s culturally unequipped to handle, she makes a deal with Dev, the grumpy, anti-marriage son of her traditional, Bengali client: she’ll help him thwart his mother’s matchmaking efforts if he helps her meet the matriarch’s exacting standards. But the line between reality and rumour blurs as Naomi is pulled deeper into lies that could end her career and break her heart.
If Naomi was in need of tantric sex pills, a Ganesh bobblehead, and Darjeeling tea bags, she was in the right place. The tightly packed aisles of Gia’s Bazaar were a mayhem of imports from India, cheap knockoffs, and the odd head-scratcher, like a small wicker basket overflowing with brown Jesus keychains nestled between bottles of Fair & Lovely face cream.
But Naomi would have to save examining the peculiar selection of inventory for later; she was twenty-two minutes late for her job interview and the uncharacteristic tardiness was giving her palpitations. After a quick lap through the deserted store confirmed she was alone, dread skittered up her spine like ascending black keys on an old piano.
What if the potential client had deemed her a no-show and left? Naomi levelled her gaze on a particularly stern-looking brown Jesus in a bid to calm her shivering heart. She tried to rally, to “pull herself up by the bootstraps” as her stepfather would say, as she had countless times before.
Unfortunately, she couldn’t ignore the whisper of doubt in the back of her mind. Not when, after recently starting her own brand consulting business, staying afloat hinged on securing a new client.
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Ann Leslie Tuttle
I need this romcom in my life! A meddling Bengali mom, a son averse to marriage, and a young woman out of her depth at her new job sound like such relatable characters. You can learn more about me and our agency at https://greatdogliterary.com/our-people . If you think we’d be a good fit, please use this link (QueryManager.com/IsmitaHussain/PitchWars) to submit a full manuscript, synopsis, and bio.
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I’m actively building my list of romcoms at the moment, and this project sounds excellent! I’d love to see more of it. If you’re interested in submitting, visit my Pitch Wars event QueryManager page (QueryManager.com/SavannahBrooks/Pitch_Wars_2022). It’ll ask for your first 20 pages.
I look forward to reading more!
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Sounds so intriguing!
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Can’t wait to see this in my box soon! Have a great day!
Harvey Klinger Literary Agency
Hi Aurora! The tension in this excerpt is amazing, and I’d love to find out what happens next. If you’re up to sharing, please send your query letter, 1-2 page synopsis, and the full manuscript. You can send everything to https://querymanager.com/query/Jemiscoe/PitchWars. If someone else from my agency requests, please send it to only one of us, but let us know of our colleague’s interest, and we will share if it’s not the right fit.
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Thanks so much! And, good luck in this process!
DeFiore and Company
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I hope to see your submission!
Harvey Klinger Literary Agency
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I love your voice and your pitch! Naomi being late is giving me heart palpitations too. I’d love to read your full manuscript, if you wouldn’t mind sending it to me. This link will lead you to my Query Manager, where you can upload your query, synopsis, and full manuscript: QueryManager.com/KellyPeterson/PitchWars
Wishing you the best of luck, and hoping to see your manuscript! =)
Rees Literary Agency