GENUINE FRAUD meets THE PARENT TRAP.
A good con relies on theatrics and misdirection. Grifter Malayka Simms has mastered both. But switching places with her newly found, wealthy identical twin will push her skills to their limits.
Especially when Malayka’s twin goes missing.
Branches crowd together overhead, russet and gold leaves still clinging to their limbs. The suburbs bleeding into suburbs bleeding into suburbs that make up NoVa press in on all sides. The houses forcing out green spaces are predatory vines leaching life from a tree.
Walking down the side of the road, I’m wiry, jumpy. Today, I finally meet my sister. She’s broken me and made me whole all at once with the truth. Today starts an adventure, a homecoming. A reckoning.
My twin, Malayka, waits at the end of this walk. She was ripped from me seventeen years ago. Over the past few months, she’s revealed herself in secret conversations. Swapped photographs. Carefully planned phone calls.
My parents abandoned my sister and adopted only me. Survivor’s guilt rankles. It’s clawed at me since Malayka told me what my parents did. She deserves a chance at success equal to mine. It’s what’s fair.
Daddy’s endowment gives four years of education to three well-deserving high school seniors every year. Meanwhile, his niece and sister-in-law suffer.
A black Nissan Altima passes and slows before pulling to the side of the road. The passenger side window rolls down as I jog to catch up with the car.
“S.J.” I lean inside. If you can have platonic soulmates? S.J. is mine. His brown eyes turn a touch golden in the dying sunlight. He shakes dreadlocks out of his face.
“What are you doing out here?” S.J. asks.
This sounds awesome! I’d love to take a look at the full manuscript. Can you send it – as well as your query letter – to me at firstname.lastname@example.org with PITCH WARS and your title in the subject? Thanks! Can’t wait to read.
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As a twin, I found your premise especially intriguing! If you’re interested, would you mind sending me the first 25 pages? You can query me at http://www.QueryMe.online/1325/PitchWars. To find out more about me, feel free to visit http://www.bookstopliterary.com/info.html.
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Hi Nicole – this sounds so dark and twisted, I’d LOVE to take a look. If you’d like to share, you can send the first 50 pages attached as a word doc to firstname.lastname@example.org. Thank you!
I’d love to see this! Can you send your query and full manuscript to email@example.com with #PitchWars in the subject line? Thanks so much!
I would love to see this one. Can you please send the full ms to me at firstname.lastname@example.org. Please put the query in the body of your email and #pitchwars in the subject line. Thanks!
I’d love to read more. Please send the first 50 pages as a Word attachment to email@example.com. Thanks!
I love a good grifter story! I have such a soft spot for stories about cons and this sounds like it is going to be so much fun! Please send me the full ms + synopsis at firstname.lastname@example.org and put Pitch Wars in the subject line. Looking forward to reading more!
This looks absolutely fantastic and I can’t wait to see more! Please send the query, synopsis, and first 30 pages to me via QueryManager (http://queryme.online/ZabeEllor)
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This sounds compelling! Please send the query, synopsis and first 100 to chquery [at] mcintoshandotis [dot] com with Pitch Wars request in the subject line. –Christa Heschke, McIntosh & Otis
After reading your pitch and excerpt, I would love to read more of this story! If you’re interested in submitting to me, please go to QueryMe.Online/SavannahBrooks and follow the instructions for how to do so. In the title space, please put “Pitch Wars: [your manuscript title]” so I can keep track of your submission. You can paste exactly what you submitted here in the corresponding categories. After you submit, you’ll receive and automated message saying I’ll be back in touch within six weeks, but I’ll be back in touch within two.
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